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Mary Libertin's avatar

This is powerful! Thanks! I shared this on Facebook, with an excerpt to encourage friends to read the entire essay.

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Ann greeley's avatar

I was excited about this turn to positive thinking about what we can do, rather than a description about what is going wrong. The language you are using is beautiful but hard to translate into real action. It is still rhetoric, not instructional; we do not really know what to do next. Suggestions: 1) create a version that is not so academic; 2) make it shorter--three or four paragraphs; 3) offer examples. Lets talk some specifics in simple terms!!

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